Concrit much appreciated. This is chapter 11 of Cliffton book 1, now edited and hopefully beta-ready. If you are looking for the older version for comparison purposes, it is here Slight warning for minor violence. Also, this chapter took For. Ever. to write. Ughhhhhhh.
If you're reading Cliffton for the first time, here are the previous chapters so you can catch up: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10