n3m3sis43: ((FMAB) Huuuughes and Winryyyy)
This is chapter 1 of Cliffton book 1. It's a reworked version of parts of my previous chapter 1, if you're curious. I've added in some details and worldbuilding -- hopefully it's enough. As always, concrit is much appreciated. Rip me to shreds. I don't mind. Warning for implied sexual abuse.


If you're reading Cliffton for the first time, here are the previous chapters so you can catch up:
Prologue


Whose side are you on, anyway? )
n3m3sis43: ((FMAB) Mustang and Huuuughes otpppp)
Here we go again. I decided to tear apart my 13 rewritten chapters and start over again because who doesn't want to read the same shit over and over a million times? Anyway, this is the prologue. As always, concrit is appreciated. Rip me to shreds -- I don't mind.


Ready or not, here it comes )

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