http://theun4givables.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] theun4givables.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] n3m3sis43 2016-12-16 01:03 am (UTC)

I am so proud of you, right now. <3

I love everything about this piece but ugh my fucking heart when Devin hears Jazz's voice like. Fuck you for that. Fuck you so hard.

Also Devin is still my favorite and this piece is 10000% why. Really. Truly. I just wish he'd let the poor reader know that Kalen's actually in on this plan but I do like that he told him to run and let him go. <3

Also also I know this isn't exactly what you set out to write but I love the tag I DON'T CONTROL MY CHARACTERS because it's so fucking trueeee omg. <3

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