Thanks! I hope you enjoyed it because I might be putting off the rewrite of Visiting Hours until Fake!NaNo. It depends on how inspired I feel to write it sooner, but I'm pretty sure it might spark All The Drama because (a) I am going to write Brendan snapping and going into Rage Mode from his POV and (b) I'm pretty sure whatever happens in this story is the trigger for Devin and his later assholery/craziness/whatever. So I might wait to do the rewrite until I'm ready to explore whatever drama in the second half is still unwritten.

Awww. I bet it's a sucky feeling. Somehow I always end up being that asshole people are jealous of and I'm just like, "uh... me? why?" Either that or I'm totally ignored, which is actually sort of okay by me sometimes.