I felt way bad for Brendan in this piece because competing with a perfect sibling or even one who is just less fucked up (in the parents' eyes) than you? It sucks.
And ugh at the fake way Kalen's all "you're still my friend." He totally screws Brendan over, doesn't he? It's pretty terrible, because Brendan just loses everything.
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Date: 2012-11-06 08:42 pm (UTC)And ugh at the fake way Kalen's all "you're still my friend." He totally screws Brendan over, doesn't he? It's pretty terrible, because Brendan just loses everything.
This was a good rewrite! :)