http://n3m3sis43.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] n3m3sis43.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] n3m3sis43 2013-01-30 06:45 pm (UTC)

Re: Final Section

So here's the deal with that. Calla has a huge amount of backstory in a (much) later chapter, and I'm trying to figure out is how to give a little more information without revealing too much before then.

The chapter in question if you're interested:
http://n3m3sis43.livejournal.com/41807.html

Any suggestions on what would be enough but not too much would be very welcome. :D

Calla actually gets the most POVs of any character in the book, buuuuut I do think the boys tend to drive the story more despite that. In my mind, they are all kind of main characters (except Kalen, who just shows up to screw things up every now and then).

Thank you for the feedback!! :D

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