http://jennickels.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jennickels.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] n3m3sis43 2013-03-20 02:31 am (UTC)

Re: some more thoughts

I can picture that. It's pretty obvious he's struggling with all the people in the house (as I would be... I'd have to just lock myself in my room and never come out).

Okay, that last part is just frustrating because I obviously don't know enough to help you then.

Now that I've read these two chapters I think you toned Wes down on your own before I even came around. He works much better for me now.

Even the obviously strange reaction of hugging Devin from behind in front of a bunch of people worked because Devin wiggled out... he's still uncomfortable with people seeing that although I assume he doesn't make as big a fuss if it's just the two of them (he's such a tease to Wes, lol). I should probably read like the next 3 chapters before commenting on 7. I'm afraid I'll forget all my comments or I'll get all confused (as I tend to do).

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