Yeah, I have some social anxiety too and I am a massive introvert so having a million people suddenly living in my house would kind of destroy me. Devin's... a lot less stable overall than I am. Even if he's sort of made out of a lot of my own personal insanity in some ways.

It's okay... just keep offering your ideas and we'll see how they evolve. I just didn't want you to feel like I'm ignoring your ideas on toning Wes and Devin down. I'm just not sure what to do with them yet, so I'm keeping them in the back of my mind to possibly use for later.

Wes is toned down at times. And not so much at others. Eventually, he does get toned down quite a bit, but a lot of things happen before that. There are times he shows his deeper/less ridiculous side and times he's a total spaz for a while.

I really like having you comment on each chapter as you go -- it's good to get your impressions even if they might change as you get farther in. That way when I'm outlining I can note all the stuff that brings up questions and look at it all as a whole as things progress. :D