I might put chapter 3 up because I'm having trouble with it and maybe you could see where it doesn't flow. I made a freaking ton of notes but they are too general like, "this is choppy," "this doesn't feel right." Stuff like that but my brain doesn't want to look at the details of it. I probably need to ignore it for a few days and go back later but it's bugging the crap out of me for some reason.
Re: some more thoughts
I might put chapter 3 up because I'm having trouble with it and maybe you could see where it doesn't flow. I made a freaking ton of notes but they are too general like, "this is choppy," "this doesn't feel right." Stuff like that but my brain doesn't want to look at the details of it. I probably need to ignore it for a few days and go back later but it's bugging the crap out of me for some reason.