I was going to suggest that! Even though my chapter 4 was a little painful for me with all the ripping apart, it really helped. Because even though I knew it was weak and not working I just couldn't even begin to figure out what the hell to do with it.
If you want to put it where I can see it, let me know. :D
Re: some more thoughts
If you want to put it where I can see it, let me know. :D