Thank you. I really didn't realize how much of a disservice I did Kalen in the original versions of these chapters until I rewrote chapter 1. Yeah, he's clueless and he really doesn't need to be a leader. But he deserves for the reader to know what's going on with him, at least to the extent that I'm able to share it.
Happy Devin makes me kinda sad. I think it's because I know he's not gonna be around much longer. But it's fun to write him happy and at least somewhat functional/likable. :D
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Date: 2013-02-07 07:54 pm (UTC)Happy Devin makes me kinda sad. I think it's because I know he's not gonna be around much longer. But it's fun to write him happy and at least somewhat functional/likable. :D