http://n3m3sis43.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] n3m3sis43.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] n3m3sis43 2013-03-25 06:04 pm (UTC)

Re: scene 1

Oh, and I just looked. Apparently, I have a conversation in the chapter after this where I vaguely address how they make ends meet. Very vaguely. As in, it's tough and Devin doesn't want to talk about it. I wonder if this conversation needs to be moved earlier in the book? Or if there needs to be more detail than that (Devin really doesn't want to talk about it)?

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