I had forgotten about that description. I remembered the pebble driveway but forgot the rest. That makes a little more sense now--why they have so much space. Now I can picture like an old Victorian. Still maybe with some peeling paint but not as dilapidated. (because I don't really picture Devin outside doing maintenance, I can see Wes doing some work but not painting the house)
Maybe Calla can just scare Zack out of the house by glaring at him. Her eyes should totally still do the glowy laser of doom thing. She'd just have to look at him and say, "out," and he'd scatter. Brendan would be shut up in the basement using the weights and not know anything was going on. Just a thought.
I do think elements of this scene should show up somewhere. Devin's reactions to being woken up was great. I think it explains better his need for coffee in the morning than him constantly stating he needs it from the chapter before. It's pretty obvious from this scene he's not a morning person.
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Re: scene 1
Date: 2013-03-25 06:33 pm (UTC)Maybe Calla can just scare Zack out of the house by glaring at him. Her eyes should totally still do the glowy laser of doom thing. She'd just have to look at him and say, "out," and he'd scatter. Brendan would be shut up in the basement using the weights and not know anything was going on. Just a thought.
I do think elements of this scene should show up somewhere. Devin's reactions to being woken up was great. I think it explains better his need for coffee in the morning than him constantly stating he needs it from the chapter before. It's pretty obvious from this scene he's not a morning person.