The quick flashbacks are a great idea. I was using them to reveal the accident in my book. At first Zoe just has flashes of the aftermath (the blood and screaming) but it doesn't reveal how it happened. Later the readers learn it was a car accident. Her next flashback shows more of the accident. Eventually she starts remembering the entire night. Although I think in my rewrite she has flashes of right before they get in the car first because she has to deal with Colby. I should probably go over that I make sure I add enough flashbacks in. Colby ends up hallucinating. I'm not sure which is worse.
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timeasmymeasure
Re: scene 3
Date: 2013-03-26 03:21 am (UTC)