Yesssss... thank you for reading and responding and yay. :D :D :D
Unless you want spoilers, I will plead the fifth on what happened to Kalen and the stuff at the fence and all that. You will get to find out some of that in chapter 4 and (I think) the rest of it in chapter 8, which is what I'm editing next time I have edit time.
I'm getting a better handle on Brendan's voice as I go, I think. One thing is I have to know most of what's going to happen in a scene before I can hear his voice well. He's a man of action. :D Oh, and I have mentioned this before 5346537547423 times but Devin talks over him. A lot. I have a 4k-ish Brendan chapter near the middle of the book I'm going to have to gut because Devin wouldn't shut up the whole time. So irritating.
Thank you so much for telling me his voice works for you here. And the time skips, because I am very time-skippy and I have at least one friend it confuses.
Good point on the "bro". I'm going to have to go through all of the stories and see how often I've done that now. Thank you!! :D
"Holy shit look how wrong everything went" is kind of the best summary of this book as a whole I can think of. Plot? Not sure it has a whole lot of plot. Things going horribly wrong? Yup, we've got that in spades here in Cliffton (which isn't even really called Cliffton).
I'm sorry I broke your heart, but I'm glad I did, too. And if this is the last time you want to kick Kalen in the nuts... well, let's just say it probably won't be. ;-)
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Date: 2013-02-04 05:52 pm (UTC)Unless you want spoilers, I will plead the fifth on what happened to Kalen and the stuff at the fence and all that. You will get to find out some of that in chapter 4 and (I think) the rest of it in chapter 8, which is what I'm editing next time I have edit time.
I'm getting a better handle on Brendan's voice as I go, I think. One thing is I have to know most of what's going to happen in a scene before I can hear his voice well. He's a man of action. :D Oh, and I have mentioned this before 5346537547423 times but Devin talks over him. A lot. I have a 4k-ish Brendan chapter near the middle of the book I'm going to have to gut because Devin wouldn't shut up the whole time. So irritating.
Thank you so much for telling me his voice works for you here. And the time skips, because I am very time-skippy and I have at least one friend it confuses.
Good point on the "bro". I'm going to have to go through all of the stories and see how often I've done that now. Thank you!! :D
"Holy shit look how wrong everything went" is kind of the best summary of this book as a whole I can think of. Plot? Not sure it has a whole lot of plot. Things going horribly wrong? Yup, we've got that in spades here in Cliffton (which isn't even really called Cliffton).
I'm sorry I broke your heart, but I'm glad I did, too. And if this is the last time you want to kick Kalen in the nuts... well, let's just say it probably won't be. ;-)