Oh oh oh. I just had the best idea. So you know how I just babbled forever about how Brendan takes the abuse for Kalen and Kalen doesn't get it and blah? THAT'S what Brendan's flashback chapter should focus on and it should probably be near the late-middle of the book where some of his rage really comes up as a major plot point.
THIS chapter should focus on mostly the present with some flashbacks interspersed. I'm not sure if I should still start it with the scene of them as kids or move it to the flashback chapter.
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Re: more of what I liked
Date: 2013-03-13 12:08 pm (UTC)THIS chapter should focus on mostly the present with some flashbacks interspersed. I'm not sure if I should still start it with the scene of them as kids or move it to the flashback chapter.