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Lose 10 Pounds of Ugly Fat... Cut Off Your Head
Scribblings of a Madwoman
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2013-02-07 10:06 pm (UTC)
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This definitely works better as the second chapter instead of the first.
The play between them is awesome, and that undercurrent of something more than roommates and best friends is apparent throughout.
I like the happy picture and the contrast between both sides of the fence. The last bit, with all the foreboding, works really well.
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Date: 2013-02-07 10:06 pm (UTC)The play between them is awesome, and that undercurrent of something more than roommates and best friends is apparent throughout.
I like the happy picture and the contrast between both sides of the fence. The last bit, with all the foreboding, works really well.