I was thinking about your suggestion that I do the library from Kalen's POV and I think I'm going to go with that. It makes it easier to show the reader that Kalen was never really who Calla thought he was, even before the bomb. Thanks for all your thoughts on that. :D
Hm, I'm so torn on the Wes and Devin parts. Like, part of me wants Wes to go first but I'm not sure what real benefit that would have. I mean, it probably makes Wes look sweeter and Devin like more of an ass, but Devin doesn't really need help looking like an ass. He does that fine on his own. And if I have Devin's POV first you get to see what a spaz Wes is first, before getting to see a little bit of added depth. So that would probably work better?
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Re: Timeline starting from the bomb again...
Date: 2013-03-27 01:54 pm (UTC)Hm, I'm so torn on the Wes and Devin parts. Like, part of me wants Wes to go first but I'm not sure what real benefit that would have. I mean, it probably makes Wes look sweeter and Devin like more of an ass, but Devin doesn't really need help looking like an ass. He does that fine on his own. And if I have Devin's POV first you get to see what a spaz Wes is first, before getting to see a little bit of added depth. So that would probably work better?