He was supposed to be a background to another character. You see how well that worked out. I really, really wanted Calla to be the protagonist. Really, I did. Although I suspect she's capable of being equally unlikable... it's interesting what people will excuse when it's a "strong female character" doing it.
Third person. Um. Yeah. That would be the logical choice, wouldn't it?
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Date: 2014-10-14 11:06 pm (UTC)Third person. Um. Yeah. That would be the logical choice, wouldn't it?