That last line, dude. That literally just makes the whole piece for me. The whole time Brendan is obviously struggling to keep his rage in check and then he finally lets take hold of him. Because you know he's absolutely lost everything he's cared about at this point.
I think even after seeing this piece, I still really, really like Brendan. Even feel for him. It's hard to compete when your sibling is perfect, y'know? And then said perfect sibling still fucks everything over for him? Yeah, I'd be pissed, too.
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Date: 2012-11-06 07:45 pm (UTC)I think even after seeing this piece, I still really, really like Brendan. Even feel for him. It's hard to compete when your sibling is perfect, y'know? And then said perfect sibling still fucks everything over for him? Yeah, I'd be pissed, too.
Good job. :D